I knew a base level knowledge on public transit as well as a bit of information about the dangers of train surfing. I had no idea what the answer of my topic question would be and I had only found out after my research. I didn’t really encounter any problems because it was a well known subject so I could easily gather info about my topic. This piece shows that i am a fast learner able to find multiple sources in a short amount of time as well as my dedication to the topic

I liked to paraphrase my sources in my essay while other people copied and quoted outright. I feel like it made my essay flow more easily since I was able to change the wording to best suit whatever point I was making in that sentence. If i could change anything i feel like i would try to keep the friendly tone throughout the essay i felt keeping a friendly tone as though i’m talking to you and not at you would’ve been better than the standard

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